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Letter to a friend whom you haven’t met since long

Letter to a friend whom you haven’t met since long xOmo1
Dear Sarah, Hope this letter finds you well. I know it has been a while that we haven’t talked or met. Trust me, I have been so busy from last few months and was alone taking care of my new born as my husband is on a short-term office project and living in London. There are plenty of things I want to share with you and just can’t wait anymore to meet you in person. Fortunately, my parents are now staying with me till the time my husband is back. It is such a relief that my mother is now with me and taking care of my son. Because of all this, I had to quit my job but as now I have support from my family, I’m thinking of joining my previous company again. I would like to invite you to a ritual and celebration we have next month for my son as he is going to complete 6 months. I would love to have you here and I don’t need any excuses. Hope to see you soon. Warm regards Sam Thomas
Dear Sarah,

Hope this letter finds you well. I know it has been a while that we haven’t talked or met.

Trust me, I have been
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so
busy from last few months and was alone taking care of my new born as my husband is on a short-term office project and living in London.

There are
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plenty
of things I want to share with you and
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just
can’t wait anymore to
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meet
you in person.
Fortunately
, my parents are
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now
staying with me till the time my husband is back. It is such a relief that my mother is
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now
with me and taking care of my son.
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Because
of all this, I had to quit my job
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but
as
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now
I have support from my family, I’m thinking of joining my previous
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company
again.

I would like to invite you to a ritual and celebration we have
next
month for my son as he is going to complete 6 months. I would
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love
to have you here and I don’t need any excuses.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

Warm regards

Sam Thomas

IELTS letter Letter to a friend whom you haven’t met since long

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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