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Write a letter to your friend about your new accommodation where you moved. In your letter you should should write why you moved; give a description of the new accommodation; invite your friend to your place.

Write a letter to your friend about your new accommodation where you moved. In your letter you should should write why you moved; give a description of the new accommodation; invite your friend to your place. 3Lr8l
Dear Jessica How are you? We moved to Yangiyer. Because My father works here. We come to study here too. We live in Marifat mahalla Yangi oy street 12. We live in an apartment. Our house is beautiful. It has a living room, two bedroom, kitchen, bathroom, dining room. There is a "Shukrona" cafe next to our house. Tomorrow is my birthday. You come here too. You turn right out of the "Shukrona" cafe and then you turn left. Love Isabella
Dear Jessica

How are you? We
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moved
to
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Yangiyer
.
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Because
My father works here. We
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come
to study here too. We
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live
in
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Marifat
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mahalla
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Yangi
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street 12.
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We
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live
in an apartment. Our
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house
is
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beautiful
. It has a living room, two bedroom, kitchen, bathroom, dining room. There is a
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
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Shukrona
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"
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
next
to our
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house
. Tomorrow is my birthday. You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here too. You turn right out of the
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
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Shukrona
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and then you turn
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left
.

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Love


Isabella
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about your new accommodation where you moved. In your letter you should should write why you moved; give a description of the new accommodation; invite your friend to your place.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
80 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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