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the local council is planning to close the park due to decreased visitors. write a letter not to do so.

the local council is planning to close the park due to decreased visitors. write a letter not to do so. d98jX

Respected sir/madam I am writing this letter behalf of children’s playground. I came to here about that the local council is planning to shut the park due to the decrease the visitors in the park. Its not just a place they are spending their time for entertainment, it is a common platform for all of them to share their ideas and to learn how to behave in a society. Even they can spend time peer group and its help in formation. Moreover its their right to play and enjoy in their own ways. The consequence if the ground no longer exist make the situation more worse. Possibility of getting addicted to computer game or even addicted to TV series or some thing else which is not good for their future. Instead of thinking about closing the area we can set some attractive activity and other ride. Which will bring our next generation pack to healthy environment. Faithfully

Respected sir/madam

I am writing this letter behalf of children’s playground. I came to here about that the local council is planning to shut the park due to the decrease the visitors in the park.

Its not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a place they are spending their time for entertainment, it is a common platform for all of them to share their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 and to learn how to behave in a society. Even they can spend time peer group and its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in formation. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 their right to play and enjoy in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 ways. The consequence if the ground no longer exist This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the situation Use only "worse" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.worse
more worse
. Possibility of getting addicted to computer game or even addicted to TV series or Did you mean "something"?something
some thing
 else which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for their future.

Instead
 of thinking about closing the area we can set This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 attractive activity and other ride. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 will bring our next
 generation pack to healthy environment.

Faithfully