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apologise for lost your book

apologise for lost your book 70j02
Dear AbdullahHow arev you? Iam fine. Iam writing to apologise for lost your book. Iam sorry. I am very shy. I used this book. It was very good. I learn many english words. So, i wrote this letter in english. But i lost this book. I am sorry! Last day, my cousin came to our home. When i was at school, my cousin was playing your book. He wrote to this book and he cut a lot of book's papers. When i went to home, i saw a written and cutted book. I did not know this book is yours. Then, i cleaned it and i put to trash. After one day, i known this book is yours and i felt sorry! My cousin was not guilty. I was guilty. I am sorry. Because i did not look after my cousin. So i looked for new and universal, modern book and i found this book. It is booknomy. If you agreed, i give to you this book. I am sorry. Iam very shy. Tomorrow, we will meet in the cafe. I am sorry again. I can not tell you how sorry i am shy. So, i wrote this letter. goodbye! your friend Abdukadir.
Dear
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AbdullahHow
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arev
you?
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Iam
fine.
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Iam
writing to
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apologise
for lost your
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.
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Iam
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sorry
. I am
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very
shy. I
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used
this
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book
. It was
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very
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good
. I learn
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many
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english
words.
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,
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i
wrote this letter in
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english
.
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But
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i
lost this
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book
. I am
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sorry
! Last day, my
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cousin
came to our home. When
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i
was at school, my
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cousin
was playing your
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book
. He wrote to this
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book and
he
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cut
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a lot of
book's papers. When
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i
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went to home
,
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i
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saw
a written and
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cutted
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book
. I did not know this
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book
is
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yours
. Then,
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i
cleaned it and
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i
put to trash. After one day,
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i
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known
this
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book
is
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yours
and
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i
felt
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! My
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cousin
was not guilty. I was guilty. I am
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.
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i
did not look after my
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i
looked for new and universal, modern
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and
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found this
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book
. It is
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booknomy
. If you
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agreed
,
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i
give to you this
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book
. I am
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.
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shy. Tomorrow, we will
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meet
in the
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. I am
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again. I can not
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you how
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am shy.
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,
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wrote this letter.
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goodbye
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your
friend
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Abdukadir
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IELTS letter apologise for lost your book

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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