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Inconvenience caused by animal of your neighbour

Inconvenience caused by animal of your neighbour N31wb
Dear Miss. Helin, Hope your doing good this pandemic. I am your new neighbor moved recently a month ago here at Los Angles, I would like to convey you about the inconvenience caused by your pet in the garden. I see your pet poop in the garden every day and its not getting cleaned up neither by authorities nor my us. we all use the garden to have morning walk and get sun kissed where we face inconvenience of poops smell and as an obstacle to walk in garden. Also, everyone use the garden for relax evening talks having brunch over there. So, I would like to suggest you to have morning and evening walks with your pet in Pet-Friendly parks or gardens. where even your pet can get great friends and spend its time with same race pets. Hope you consider this as deep inconvenience caused and take a quick action accordingly else where I may need to concern the required person to have formal Action for inconvenience caused. Yours Faithfully, Priyarani.
Dear Miss.
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Helin
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Hope your doing
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good
this pandemic. I am your new neighbor
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moved
recently a month ago here at Los Angles, I would like to convey you about the
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inconvenience
caused by your pet in the
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garden
. I
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see
your pet
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poop
in the
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garden
every day and its not getting cleaned up neither by authorities nor my us. we all
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use
the
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garden
to have morning walk and
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get
sun kissed where we face
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inconvenience
of
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poops
smell and as an obstacle to walk in
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garden
.
Also
, everyone
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use
the
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garden
for relax evening talks having brunch over there.
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So
, I would like to suggest you to have morning and evening walks with your pet in Pet-Friendly parks or
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gardens
.
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where
even your pet can
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get
great friends and spend its time with same race pets.

Hope you consider this as deep
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inconvenience
caused and take a quick action
accordingly
else where I may need to concern the required person to have formal Action for
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inconvenience
caused.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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Priyarani
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IELTS letter Inconvenience caused by animal of your neighbour

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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