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Letter invite your friend to visit India.

Letter invite your friend to visit India. 9rXpn

Dear John, I hope this letter catches you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to visit India. I know you always wanted to visit here and trust me this is the best time of the year to travel here because of the celebration of the traditional festival Deepawali. Deepavali falls in the month of October and November and people start getting their houses whitewashed prior a month or two to this festival. It literally means row of lights. Everything looks so new and beautiful. It is celebrated to commemorate the arrival of Hindu's Lord Rama after 14 years of exile. People wear new clothes and burn crackers at night. After that, we worship goddess Lakshmi according to a ritual. Everything is just fun and frolic. To be honest, you should not miss this opportunity as it will also help you greatly in your project globalisation and tradition and you will see that Indian people have not forgotten their traditions in spite of being a part of a global village which is totally influenced by Western culture. Please bring your parents along if they can spare time. I know you will enjoy it a lot. Hoping to see you soon. Best wishes, Priyanka

Dear John,

I hope this letter catches you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to visit India. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 know you always wanted to visit here and trust me this is the best time of the year to travel here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the celebration of the traditional festival Deepawali.

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Deepavali
 falls in the month of October and November and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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start
 getting their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 whitewashed prior a month or two to this festival. It literally
 means row of lights. Everything looks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 new and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
. It is celebrated
 to commemorate the arrival of Hindu's Lord Rama after 14 years of exile. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 wear new clothes and burn crackers at night. After that, we worship goddess Lakshmi according to a ritual. Everything is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 fun and frolic.

To be honest, you should not miss this opportunity as it will also
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help
 you greatly
 in your project Possible spelling mistake. 'globalisation' is British English.globalization
globalisation
 and tradition and you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that Indian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have not forgotten their traditions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 being a part of a global village which is totally
 influenced by Western culture. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 bring your parents along if they can spare time. I know you will enjoy it a lot.

Hoping to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

Priyanka