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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

Dear Mr. Ali, I would like to inform you that my student ID card has been lost yesterday on my way goin home. It was around 9. 00am when riding the public transport, I eventually realized that my Identification card is not with me anymore. Unfortunately, I still do not know its whereabouts. Due to this unexpected circumstances, the guard does not allow me to enter the school premises. It inhibits me to attend my daily classes, thus it might affect my grades eventually. I am aware that every students are responsible with their belongings and should suffer its consequences in the event of lost or damage. I have been experiencing stress and anxiety and losing my appetite as well since I misplaced my card. However, I am still hoping to find it and already asked help from my colleagues and families. I sincerely ask for an exchange card therefore I can attend my class regularly and continue to pursue with my studies inside the campus. Thank you so much for the consideration in advance. Sincerely, Jennylyn
Dear Mr. Ali,

I would like to inform you that my student ID
card
has
been lost
yesterday on my way
goin
home. It was around 9. 00am when riding the public transport, I
eventually
realized that my Identification
card
is not with me anymore. Unfortunately, I
still
do not know its whereabouts.

Due to this unexpected circumstances, the guard does not
allow
me to enter the school premises. It inhibits me to attend my daily classes,
thus
it might affect my grades
eventually
. I am aware that every
students
are responsible with their belongings and should suffer its consequences in the
event
of lost or damage. I have been experiencing
stress
and anxiety and losing my appetite
as well
since I misplaced my
card
.
However
, I am
still
hoping to find it and already asked
help
from my colleagues and families. I
sincerely
ask for
an exchange
card
therefore
I can attend my
class
regularly
and continue to pursue with my studies inside the campus.

Thank you
so
much for the consideration in advance.

Sincerely
,

Jennylyn
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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