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Dear Sir/Madam, My Name is Jackie, I am writing this letter to express my top interest in the computer course which is offered by your prestigious institution. I was scrolling my Linkedin account and saw a course ad offered, even though I do not hold the elementary course which is compulsory but I assure you it would be a great addition if I get the chance. Let me explain my situation, I always had a great passion for computer sciences and logistics and I will proceed with it after completion of high school. During my secondary school, I read all previous and new available articles and magazines where I came across the latest advancements in computer technology. However, due to the financial crisis, I stopped my schooling and had to take a short break. After coming across a computer program offered by you, I become hopeful again to live my dream to study the subject of my interest. Lastly, I am aware that it is mandatory to have completed an elementary degree in computer sciences to qualify for this course in your institution but I would like to request to you if it's possible to make an exemption in this case as a learning computer knowledge is always been challenging and hazardous for me, Your favour to exempt your code of conduct in this regard could be an awesome step for my dreams to come true, also It would be a great opportunity for me to sharpen my skills under the shadow of pompous colleagues and knowledgeable teachers. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jackie
Dear Sir/Madam,

My Name is Jackie, I am writing this letter to express my top interest in the computer
course
which
is offered
by your prestigious institution. I was scrolling my
Linkedin
account and
saw
a
course
ad offered,
even though
I do not hold the elementary
course
which is compulsory
but
I assure you it would be a great addition if I
get
the chance.

Let
me
explain
my situation, I always had a great passion for computer sciences and logistics and I will proceed with it after completion of high school. During my secondary school, I read all previous and new available articles and magazines where I came across the latest advancements in computer technology.

However
, due to the financial crisis, I
stopped
my schooling and had to take a short break. After coming across a computer program offered by you, I become hopeful again to
live
my dream to study the subject of my interest.

Lastly
, I am aware that it is mandatory to have completed an elementary degree in computer sciences to qualify for this
course
in your institution
but
I would like to request to you if it's possible to
make
an exemption
in this case
as a learning computer knowledge is always been challenging and hazardous for me, Your
favour
to exempt your code of conduct in this regard could be an awesome step for my dreams to
come
true,
also
It would be a great opportunity for me to sharpen my
skills
under the shadow of pompous colleagues and knowledgeable teachers.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jackie
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your enrollment office.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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