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Friend coming to your city

Friend coming to your city 0AJmQ
Dear Jahan, How have you been? I am so glad you are moving to Boston for work. Since your love everything about architecture, you will particularly love Boston for its historic buildings and parks. I would love to show you around in your first week here. We will walk around downtown specifically looking at Boston’s historic public library, dog parks, and then come to the beautiful Charles river to enjoy a cool, crisp Boston evening as we watch the sunset. I highly recommend you choose a neighborhood that is in the vicinity of Boston, Cambridge or Harvard as I hear that your office is located in Cambridge. I am thrilled to tell you that it is very close to my office which is located at Kendall Square and I hope to see you for lunch and casual post-work hangouts often. Boston has great public transportation, you can either take the bus or a subway to get into Cambridge. You can inquire if your employer provides a subsidized monthly commuter pass which would make your travel much cheaper. Boston has a great social life too. We have some of the top universities here including the M. I. T, Harvard University, and the Northeastern University in Downtown Boston. You will see that the city has a ton of restaurants and bars that is filled with the hustle and bustle of a young crowd during weekends. We will run into new faces all the time as you enjoy the museums, aquariums, etc. around Boston. I will be introducing you to my friends as well, I am sure they will be happy to meet you. Even though you will miss your current city, I am sure you will get comfortable in Boston soon and will be happy to call it your home. Yours truly, Pooja
Dear
Jahan
,

How have you been? I am
so
glad you are moving to Boston for work. Since your
love
everything about architecture, you will
particularly
love
Boston for its historic buildings and parks. I would
love
to
show
you around in your
first
week here. We will walk around downtown
specifically
looking at Boston’s historic public library, dog parks, and then
come
to the
beautiful
Charles river
to enjoy a cool, crisp Boston evening as we
watch
the sunset.

I
highly
recommend you choose a neighborhood
that is
in the vicinity of Boston, Cambridge or Harvard as I hear that your office
is located
in Cambridge. I
am thrilled
to
tell
you that it is
very
close to my office which
is located
at Kendall Square and I hope to
see
you for lunch and casual post-work hangouts
often
. Boston has great public transportation, you can either take the bus or a subway to
get
into Cambridge. You can inquire if your employer provides a subsidized monthly commuter pass which would
make
your travel much cheaper.

Boston has a great social life too. We have
some of the
top universities here including the M. I. T, Harvard University, and the Northeastern University in Downtown Boston. You will
see
that the city has a ton of restaurants and bars that
is filled
with the hustle and bustle of a young crowd during weekends. We will run into new faces all the time as you enjoy the museums, aquariums, etc. around Boston. I will be introducing you to my friends
as well
, I am sure they will be happy to
meet
you.

Even though
you will miss your
current
city, I am sure you will
get
comfortable in Boston
soon
and will be happy to call it your home.

Yours
truly
,

Pooja
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