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Hello, friends who have received letters, it's already a youth thing to write letters and communicate. Now I feel a little excited to relive my old dreams. I look forward to getting a reply to the letters sent. I like traveling, fitness, movies, various adventure sports and others, so I won't list them one by one. I hope the friends who have received letters will always be happy and healthy! I also hope that one day I can meet my pen pal and travel around the world together. Thinking about that kind of scene makes people happy. Finally, I wish you and your family and friends peace and health forever, Ye Huan.
Hello, friends who have received
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letters
, it's already a youth thing to write
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letters
and communicate.
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Now
I feel a
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little
excited to relive my
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old
dreams. I look forward to getting a reply to the
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letters
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sent
. I like traveling, fitness, movies, various adventure sports
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and others
,
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so
I won't list them one by one.
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I
hope the friends who have received
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letters
will always be happy and healthy!
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I
also
hope that one day I can
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meet
my pen pal and travel around the world together. Thinking about that kind of scene
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makes
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people
happy.
Finally
, I wish you and your family and friends peace and health forever, Ye
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Huan
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IELTS letter friends who have received letters

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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