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Write a letter of complaint to the airport authorities about the problem you are facing, and which is important to fix. In your letter. Provide information about your flight. why are you disappointed suggest some improvements to airport services.

Write a letter of complaint to the airport authorities about the problem you are facing, and which is important to fix. In your letter. Provide information about your flight. why are you disappointed suggest some improvements to airport services. p1G63
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction of the services which you provide on the airport. I was traveling to Dubai from Karachi; my departure date was 01-September-2021 at 1: 30am. I bought a business class ticket. The problem is started as soon as I arrived at the airport. Foremost, airline did not intimate me regarding the flight delay, due to that fact, I was asked to wait in the executive lounge. However, when I went there, I couldn’t find a vacant seat as it was full. It was so disappointed for me. Nevertheless, upon my request they arranged a seat for me in economy lounge. Furthermore, seats in the lounge were uncomfortable. Additionally, the air conditioner was not working properly, due to that fact, I was having a breathing issue. There are some suggestions I would like you to give you. Firstly, extend the space of executive lounge so It would accommodate hundreds of people. Secondly, train your maintenance team so they will be more proactive to repair the faulty equipment before it stops working. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, XYZ,
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction of the services which you provide on the airport.

I was traveling to Dubai from Karachi; my departure date was 01-September-2021 at 1: 30am.
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I
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bought
a business
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class
ticket.

The problem is
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started
as
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soon
as I arrived at the airport. Foremost, airline did not intimate me regarding the flight delay, due to that fact, I
was asked
to wait in the executive
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lounge
.
However
, when I went there, I couldn’t find a vacant seat as it was full. It was
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so
disappointed for me.
Nevertheless
, upon my request they arranged a seat for me in economy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lounge
.
Furthermore
, seats in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lounge
were uncomfortable.
Additionally
, the air conditioner was not working
properly
, due to that fact, I was having a breathing issue.

There are
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some
suggestions I would like you to give you.
Firstly
, extend the space of executive
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lounge
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so
It would accommodate hundreds of
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people
.
Secondly
, train your maintenance team
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so
they will be more proactive to repair the faulty equipment
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before
it
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stops
working.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

XYZ,
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IELTS letter Write a letter of complaint to the airport authorities about the problem you are facing, and which is important to fix. In your letter. Provide information about your flight. why are you disappointed suggest some improvements to airport services.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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