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Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you left the papers, explain why they are so important, tell the manager what him to do

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you left the papers, explain why they are so important, tell the manager what him to do Q5NWX
Sir, It was a pleasure to attend my conference at your hotel regarding my new project and ideas. This is a really important project for improving your hotel. This is a multi million of dollars renovation which will allow you to improve he standing of your hotel and you will be able to receive prestigious customers and to increase the number of them as well. I am writing you this letter, because with the rush we had at the end of the conference, I totally forget to pick up the last set of drawings, I left at the reception to your team manager as they wanted to be aware of the future changes. The set of drawing might be on the front desk at the reception. Sir, I would like to ask you if it is possible to post them to my office. I will be eternally grateful. The timing is too short for me to come back and pick them, as I have to submit them to the consultant before the end of next week. After this, we will need to get the signature from the building consent and then the construction will start. It was a pleasure to meet you, work with you. I look forward to hearing from you and see you next month before the renovation. Please let me know for any last details or questions you would like to add. Many thanksKind regards
Sir, It was a pleasure to attend my conference at your hotel regarding my new project and
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important
project for improving your hotel. This is a multi million of dollars renovation which will
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allow
you to
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improve
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he standing
of your hotel and you will be able to receive prestigious customers and to increase the number of them
as well
. I am writing you this letter,
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because
with the rush we had at the
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end
of the conference, I
totally
forget to pick up the last set of drawings, I
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left
at the reception to your team manager as they wanted to be aware of the future
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changes
. The set of drawing might be on the front desk at the reception. Sir, I would like to ask you if it is possible to post them to my office. I will be
eternally
grateful. The timing is too short for me to
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come
back and pick them, as I
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have to
submit them to the consultant
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before
the
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end
of
next
week. After this, we will need to
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get
the signature from the building consent and then the construction will
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start
. It was a pleasure to
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meet
you, work with you. I look forward to hearing from you and
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see
you
next
month
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before
the renovation.
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Please
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let
me know for any last
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details
or questions you would like to
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add
.
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thanksKind
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regards
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you left the papers, explain why they are so important, tell the manager what him to do

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
237 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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