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You have been working as a senior executive in a private company for last six years .You received a salary raised four years ago. Write a letter to you manager to request a raise in your salary. -explain why you are writing -Why you think you deserve a salary raise - say why you want your manager to do for you.

You have been working as a senior executive in a private company for last six years. You received a salary raised four years ago. Write a letter to you manager to request a raise in your salary. -explain why you are writing -Why you think you deserve a salary raise - say why you want your manager to do for you. JR5j

Dear Mr. Suraj, I hope this letter finds you in good health and best of spirits and did not catch you at a busy time. i am writing this letter to ask you some professional favor from you. As you know I have been working for the company from past six years I have not only given my plethora amount of time to exceed every client satisfaction but also gained tremendous knowledge from this company as well However, when it comes to raise in my wage. I got one about four years ago, since then I neither got any salary raise nor any salary review even though our company as yearly payroll review. I think I deserve a raise because not only I have worked hard with complete enthusiasm and minimum error in my six year of time span in this company apart from this have been grateful for playing two roles for the company – one of course as an senior executive and other one as an professional trainer for the new recruits. Therefore, based on my hard work and dedication towards my company, I would really appreciate if you could take the necessary step to recommend a salary raise for me at your earliest convenience. I will be much obliged.

Dear Mr. Suraj,

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company
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, based on my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and dedication towards my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, I would really
 appreciate if you could take the necessary step to recommend a salary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhikeboostincrement
raise
 for me at your earliest convenience. I will be much obliged. 