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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. 8KYG

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting you about new model of Samsund TV. I saw on your website you start to sell it, however I could not find any details about avalibal devaces in the shops. I want to order it but I need more details about cost and reservation. Unfortunatelly your company did not add any price in advertisement of this model and if you have opportunity to give me this peace of information, I will be appreciated. I hope you have this TV set in the shop pleace let me know about it and if you can let it hold reserved for me. I could not find any information on your site about period of time for reservation If you be kind you might send this peace of information to me. I hope you will find time to reply and I will be happy owner of this TV. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfuly, John Dou

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.writingwrithinggrittingwittingwrit ting
writting
 you about new model of Possible spelling mistake found.Samsung
Samsund
 TV. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 on your website you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to sell it, however
 I could not find any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about Possible spelling mistake found.availableTalibanavailAmaliaCalibanAnibal
avalibal
Possible spelling mistake found.devicesdefaces
devaces
 in the shops. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to order it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I need more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about cost and reservation. Possible spelling mistake found.Unfortunately
Unfortunatelly
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 any price in The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?advertisement for
advertisement of
 this model and if you have opportunity to give me this Did you mean "piece"?piece
peace
 of information, I will be appreciated
.

I hope you have this TV set in the shop Possible spelling mistake found.placepleasepeacePeace
pleace
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know about it and if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 it hold reserved for me. I could not find any information on your site about period of time for reservation If you be kind you might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 this Did you mean "piece"?piece
peace
 of information to me.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will find time to reply and I will be happy owner of this TV.

Thank you for your time.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfulfaithfullyfaithfulsfaithful y
faithfuly
,

John Possible spelling mistake found.YouDoDogDuoDougDot
Dou