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There is a sewer line overflow near your house. You called the waste water services for repair two days back,but no action has been taken yet. In your letter write a cpmplaint to the city council about this incident. Explain the difficulties you are facing. Write your expectation and action plan

There is a sewer line overflow near your house. You called the waste water services for repair two days back, but no action has been taken yet. In your letter write a cpmplaint to the city council about this incident. Explain the difficulties you are facing. Write your expectation and action plan Y2qOm
Dear Commissioner, I am writing this letter to report a serious issue that we, the people of Ashford Apartments, are facing from 24th June 2021. It looks like the sewage system near our house was blocked, which resulted in overflow of gutter water. Let me explain the situation. On 24th of June 2021 we happend to notice an unplesant odor in our community and was able to find out that it's because of the sewage water which is overflowing from a blocked sewage system. As a board member of the community, it is my responsibility to make sure that the issue is immediately taken care off. I immediately filed a complaint to the Waste water Services and requested them to take action as soon as possible because, it is un hygenic to live in such circumstances, especially with children and senior community living around. I expected an instant action from the Waste water Services, but that did not happen. My follow-up calls are unattended and it's hard for me to understand what exactly is going on there. On behalf of Ashford Apartments, I would like to request you to look into this issue and make sure that the sewage water is taken care off as asoon as possible because, it has already been a week and people living here already started facing health related issues. I hope to hear from you about this incident. Yours faithfully, Harsha
Dear Commissioner,

I am writing this letter to report a serious issue that we, the
people
of Ashford Apartments, are facing from 24th June 2021. It looks like the sewage system near our
house
was blocked
, which resulted in overflow of gutter water.

Let
me
explain
the situation. On 24th of June 2021 we
happend
to notice an
unplesant
odor in our community and was able to find out that it's
because
of the sewage
water
which is overflowing from a blocked sewage system.

As a board member of the community, it is my responsibility to
make
sure that the issue is immediately taken care off. I immediately filed a complaint to the Waste
water
Services and requested them to take action as
soon
as possible
because
,

it is
un
hygenic
to
live
in such circumstances,
especially
with children and senior community living around. I
expected
an instant action from the Waste
water
Services,
but
that did not happen. My follow-up calls
are unattended
and it's
hard
for me
to


understand
what exactly is going on there.

On behalf of Ashford Apartments, I would like to request you to look into this issue and
make
sure that the sewage
water
is taken
care off as
asoon
as possible
because
, it has already been a week and
people
living here already
started
facing health related issues.

I hope to hear from you about this incident.

Yours
faithfully
,

Harsha
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IELTS letter There is a sewer line overflow near your house. You called the waste water services for repair two days back, but no action has been taken yet. In your letter write a cpmplaint to the city council about this incident. Explain the difficulties you are facing. Write your expectation and action plan

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  American English
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236 words
6.0
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