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With this letter, I am extremely glad to provide my highest possible reference for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru in support of his application to your prestigious university/Institute Master Program Scholarship.

With this letter, I am extremely glad to provide my highest possible reference for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru in support of his application to your prestigious university/Institute Master Program Scholarship. jRVD1
I am Anupam Chatterjee, my NOHA application number is 347. I am writing to appeal to the reconsideration of my current scholarship status. This course and scholarship are very important to continue my education. I would sincerely like to explain the key reasons why I rightfully deserve this academic scholarship. In the online admission form, I already mentioned that I have been intentionally engaged with a social welfare society since 2016 and I also provided the recommendation letter from them. For the last 4 years, I have been involving myself in community development and humanitarianism and gained vast experience of how to utilize the necessary resources properly and public management. Right now, at the time of the coronavirus pandemic situation, I am proactively working with my own welfare organization to provide groceries and food to those daily wagers who are badly affected by a 21-day lockdown. Moreover, I sufficiently convinced some other people and make a team to deliver the grocery and vegetables at the doorstep so local people can stay at their home. Besides, I am working diligently with other responsible agencies to spread social awareness within the local community. Apart from that, I am trilingual. I can speak Bengali, Hindi, and English. It enables me to work in South Asian countries as well as globally. The cost of this academic course and the living costs are too high. Without the academic scholarship, I cannot reasonably afford it because EUR is very stronger than INR. This course will provide me equally strong theoretical and practical aspects of humanitarianism, will enrich my experience and help me to achieve a global perspective as well as my specific career goals. I am respectfully requesting you to carefully consider my four typical years’ practical experience in the humanitarian field, the highest qualification where I typically scored 65% and language capabilities of mine once again. I reasonably expect you can correctly perceive my potentiality for this particular field. I hope that you reconsider my earnest plea and secure my placement at the humanitarian forces. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my appeal.
I am
Anupam
Chatterjee
, my
NOHA
application number is 347. I am writing to appeal to the reconsideration of my
current
scholarship status. This course and scholarship are
very
important
to continue my education. I would
sincerely
like to
explain
the key reasons why I
rightfully
deserve this academic scholarship.

In the online admission form, I already mentioned that I have been
intentionally
engaged with a social welfare society since 2016 and I
also
provided the recommendation letter from them. For the last 4 years, I have been involving myself in community development and humanitarianism and gained vast experience of how to utilize the necessary resources
properly
and public management. Right
now
, at the time of the coronavirus pandemic situation, I am
proactively
working with my
own
welfare organization to provide groceries and food to those daily wagers who are
badly
affected
by a 21-day lockdown.
Moreover
, I
sufficiently
convinced
some
other
people
and
make
a team to deliver the grocery and vegetables at the doorstep
so
local
people
can stay at their home.
Besides
, I am working
diligently
with other responsible agencies to spread social awareness within the local community. Apart from that, I am trilingual. I can speak Bengali, Hindi, and English. It enables me to work in South Asian countries
as well
as globally.

The cost of this academic course and the living costs are too high. Without the academic scholarship, I cannot
reasonably
afford it
because
EUR is
very
stronger than INR. This course will provide me
equally
strong theoretical and practical aspects of humanitarianism, will enrich my experience and
help
me to achieve a global perspective
as well
as my specific career goals. I am
respectfully
requesting you to
carefully
consider my four typical years’ practical experience in the humanitarian field, the highest qualification where I
typically
scored 65% and language capabilities of mine once again. I
reasonably
expect
you can
correctly
perceive my potentiality for this particular field.
I
hope that you reconsider my earnest plea and secure my placement at the humanitarian forces.

Thank you
so
much for taking the time to read my appeal.
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IELTS letter With this letter, I am extremely glad to provide my highest possible reference for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru in support of his application to your prestigious university/Institute Master Program Scholarship.

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