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Letter about summer holidays

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Dear Ben, Thank you for your lette. I’m glad you enjoyed being in Australia, seeing all thise animals. My last summer I spent in Russia, on village, it’s not far from my flat, only 200 kilometers. I I was swimming and sunbathing in the sun. I also ate a lot of ice cream and helped my grandmother. One day I'd like to visit the Japan because I want to see the local sights and get to know the culture of Japan better. Sorry I'm late for class I'll write later Write back soon. Best wishes, Kirill
Dear Ben,

Thank you for your
lette
. I’m glad you enjoyed being in Australia, seeing all
thise
animals.

My last summer I spent in Russia, on village, it’s not far from my flat,
only
200 kilometers.
I I
was swimming and sunbathing in the sun. I
also
ate
a lot of
ice cream and
helped
my grandmother. One day I'd like to visit the Japan
because
I want to
see
the local sights and
get
to know the culture of Japan better. Sorry I'm late for
class
I'll write
later


Write back
soon
.

Best wishes,

Kirill
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IELTS letter Letter about summer holidays

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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