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Write a letter to the postmaster complaining about the non delivery of money order

Write a letter to the postmaster complaining about the non delivery of money order BJLEj

Dear Sir, I am Patrick Smith resident of Flat no: 587, Urban Estate, Leeds, writing to complain about my undelivered money order. My parents from London sent me 1500 pounds in a money order on 30 October last month. I was expecting to receive the payment by first week of November as post office claims to deliver everything within country in 10 days. However, when I did not get the money order till 10th, I assumed there must be some reason of delay and it will reach me within 2 3 days. Today is 26th November and the parcel is not received yet. I have to pay my college fee and the last date to the pay fee is 2nd December. After this date, I will have to bear the fine which I do not want to pay. I would request you to enquire about my money order where it got struck and make arrangements to deliver it to me as soon as possible so that I will not have to bear the penalty of late fee. Hoping for your immediate attention on this matter. Yours faithfully, Patrick Smith.

Dear Sir,

I am Patrick Smith resident of Flat no: 587, Urban Estate, Leeds, writing to complain about my undelivered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 order.

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sent
 me Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.1500 pounds (0.68 t)1500 pounds (0.68 ton)1500 pounds (ca. 680 kg)1500 pounds (680.39 kg)1500 pounds (ca. 680 kilogram)1500 pounds (680.39 kilogram)
1500 pounds
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 order on 30 October last month. I was expecting to receive the payment by first
 week of November as post office claims to deliver everything within country in 10 days. However
, when I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 order till 10th, I assumed there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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some
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Today
 is 26th November and the parcel is not received yet
.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay my college fee and the last date to the pay fee is 2nd December. After this date, I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bear the fine which I do not want to pay.

I would request you to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 order where it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 struck and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 arrangements to deliver it to me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I will not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bear the penalty of late fee.

Hoping for your immediate attention on this matter.

Yours faithfully
,

Patrick Smith. 