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Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival VBwrD
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing to express my gratitude to your organisation of Octoberfest last year. I have received great pleasure attending it. Especially, I was thrilled by the opportunity to cook fried meat on my own using the grills that you provided free of charge for participants. Even though I am into beer myself, such a wide variety of craft beer was great and my husband enjoyed it a lot. Personally, I tasted a cherry beer for the first time and was pleasantly surprised. By the way, I would like to help you with the conduction of Octoberfest as I noticed that there were not enough waiters during the celebration. I guess everyone just wanted to chill out and take a rest. That is why I think that an extra pair of hands will be useful and I will be glad to suggest my free help in the Fest. Frankly speaking, we liked the festival so much that we are planning to visit it next year. Could you please be so kind to give me some information about it? When and what location will the October west be conducted? Will it be possible to stay in the camp like the previous year? Should we bring our own costumes or will they be available for the rent at the festival? Thank you in advance for your kind attention to this matter. Sincerely yours, Maria V
Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing to express my gratitude to your
organisation
of
Octoberfest
last year
. I have received great pleasure attending it.
Especially
, I
was thrilled
by the opportunity to cook fried meat on my
own
using the grills that you provided free of charge for participants.
Even though
I am into beer myself, such a wide variety of craft beer was great and my husband enjoyed it a lot.
Personally
, I tasted a cherry beer for the
first
time and was
pleasantly
surprised.

By the way, I would like to
help
you with the conduction of
Octoberfest
as I noticed that there were not
enough
waiters during the celebration. I guess everyone
just
wanted to chill out and take a rest.
That is
why I
think
that an extra pair of hands will be useful and I will be glad to suggest my free
help
in the Fest.

Frankly
speaking, we liked the festival
so
much that we are planning to visit it
next
year.

Could you
please
be
so
kind to give me
some
information about it? When and what location will the October west
be conducted
? Will it be possible to stay in the camp like the previous year? Should we bring our
own
costumes or will they be available for the rent at the festival?

Thank you in advance for your kind attention to this matter.

Sincerely
yours,

Maria V
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
235 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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