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Write to Mr.Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help

Write to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help KWeLN
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing this letter to thank you for your hospitality and help when I was in San Francisco. During my stay, you let me to stay at your home, that was a big honor. Not only that, you gave my some extremely good advice like where I can go to visit and malls that has good cost. At the weekend, you drove go visit many places, but the most impressive was the Golden Gate Bridge. Thanks to you, I had a wonderful time in this city. I hope you gave me a chance to return your kindness. Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam. Once again my thank for your hospitality. Your friend
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing this letter to thank you for your hospitality and
help
when I was in San Francisco. During my stay, you
let
me to stay at your home, that was a
big
honor. Not
only
that, you gave my
some
extremely
good
advice like where I can go to visit and malls that has
good
cost. At the weekend, you drove go visit
many
places,
but
the most impressive was the Golden Gate Bridge. Thanks to you, I had a wonderful time in this city. I hope you gave me a chance to return your kindness.
Please
have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you in Vietnam. Once again my thank for your hospitality. Your
friend
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IELTS letter Write to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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