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Motivation Letter for Internship Opportunities

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Motivation Letter Be Brave, January 2022 Name: Eren MUTLU Date of Birth: 15 January 1999 Country: Turkey Available: from February 2022 Dear Sir/Madam, With this letter I would like to apply for the position Be Brave ESC Project, Wroclaw, Poland. My name is Eren, and I am 22 years old. I am 4th years Computer Engineering student at Karabuk University. I have the English Certificate of Karabuk and my level in English is B2. I am currently working as a Junior Game Developer at Rotatelab Company. I’ve been passionate about coding since I was student at High School. Throughout my 6+ years of experience. I’ve worked in a bunch of companies. I gained great experiences from my supervisors. I appreciate them for all their contributions. I am a very active person who likes to be always doing things. I like to keep myself improved and eager to learn new things. I want to make the world better place with quality software development tools and practices. But at this moment I want to try to challenge on myself to find my inner peace. It would be great to have different worldviews. For the changing of my perspective, I need to try to focus on new subjects and Wroclaw is a city that I defined on my to do list as the cities that I need to travel. I believe that after this project my whole life will be totally changed in a good way. I believe that after this project my whole life will be totally changed in a good way. One of my main goals is to gain good friendships and memories. I wish everyone would do what they really love doing. Time is ticking, but what a wonderful place could be this world if everyone would spend some time to make his personal contribution. If you are looking for someone responsible, qualified, reliable, and tolerant of different worldview I’d love to be the part of your team and help to bring positive changes to our world. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Eren MUTLU
Motivation Letter Be Brave, January 2022

Name:
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Eren
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MUTLU


Date of Birth: 15 January 1999

Country: Turkey

Available: from February 2022

Dear Sir/Madam,

With this letter I would like to apply for the position Be Brave ESC Project,
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Wroclaw
, Poland. My name is
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Eren
, and I am 22 years
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old
. I am 4th years Computer Engineering student at
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Karabuk
University. I have the English Certificate of
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Karabuk
and my level in English is B2.
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I
am
currently
working as a Junior Game Developer at
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Rotatelab
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Company
.

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I
’ve been passionate about coding since I was student at High School. Throughout my 6+ years of experience. I’ve worked in a bunch of
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companies
. I gained great experiences from my supervisors.
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I
appreciate them for all their contributions.
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I
am a
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very
active person who likes to be always doing things.
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I
like to
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keep
myself
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improved
and eager to learn new things.
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I
want to
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make
the world better place with quality software development tools and practices.

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But
at this moment I want to try to challenge on myself to find my inner peace. It would be great to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
worldviews. For the changing of my perspective, I need to try to focus on new subjects and
'Wroclaw' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "Wrocław"
Wroclaw
is a city that I defined on my
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to do
list as the cities that I need to travel. I believe that after this project my whole life will be
totally
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changed
in a
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good
way. I believe that after this project my whole life will be
totally
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changed
in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way. One of my main goals is to gain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
friendships and memories.

I wish everyone would do what they
really
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love
doing. Time is ticking,
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but
what a

wonderful place could be this world if everyone would spend
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some
time to
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make
his personal

contribution. If you are looking for someone responsible, qualified, reliable, and tolerant of

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different
worldview I’d
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love
to be the part of your team and
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help
to bring
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positive
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changes
to our world. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely


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Eren
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MUTLU
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter for Internship Opportunities

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
348 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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