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You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer

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Dear Sir / Madam, I want to apply for this vacancy because I found out that there is a part-time job in your ad and I think your requirements will suit me. My name is Dina Turner. I am 22 years old and am currently studying international tourism at university. I work in hotels every summer vacation and develop my theoretical and practical knowledge in a coordinated way. In addition, I can speak English fluently and even have hotel document management skills. These three months of summer would be a great practical experience and opportunity for me to work part-time at a hotel. I would also like to know if you can create temporary living conditions for hotel staff living far from the city? I would certainly be interested in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an interview. For your convenience I enclose my resume. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Dina Turner.

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