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5- YOU WERE SENT BY YOUR COMPANY TO ATTEND A MEETING IN ANOTHER COUNTRY,BUT YOU ARE NOT HAPPY WITH THE HOTEL YOUR ORGANIZER BOOKED FOR YOU.

5- YOU WERE SENT BY YOUR COMPANY TO ATTEND A MEETING IN ANOTHER COUNTRY, BUT YOU ARE NOT HAPPY WITH THE HOTEL YOUR ORGANIZER BOOKED FOR YOU. g8NjL

1 I have just returned from the meeting which I had attended last week. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about hotel which you had booked for me in Bangalore, Taj hotel. The meeting was stupendous. All the delegates comes from the different places and my presentation would be eye catching. The products of the company excellent and we have received positive feedback from other manager. I had troubled with in hotel where I stayed for two night and also there are I had problem with the communicating people owing to no one speak English they prefer to speak kannada which are they follow. I would like you to be careful about the hotel booking in future. kindly ensure that the hotel booking in another country would be checked so that employee are not inconveniences. Thanking you. Your faithfully.

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I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 returned from the meeting which I had attended last week. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 which you had booked for me in Bangalore, Possible spelling mistake found.TAJTaxTagTanTapTa
Taj
 hotel.

The meeting was stupendous. All the delegates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 from the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places and my presentation would be eye catching. The products of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).excellent, and
excellent and
 we have received This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 feedback from other manager.

I had troubled with in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 where I stayed for two night and also
 there are I had problem with the communicating This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 owing to no one speak English they prefer to speak Possible spelling mistake found.Kannada
kannada
 which are they follow.

I would like you to be careful about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 booking Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterKindly
kindly
 ensure that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 booking in another country would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
The verb 'are' is plural. Did you mean: "that employee is"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?that employee is
that employee are
 not inconveniences.

Thanking you.

Your faithfully
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