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WRITE A LETTER TO A FRIEND WHO IS LOOKING FOR A PART TIME JOB TO SUPPORT HIS STUDIES.

WRITE A LETTER TO A FRIEND WHO IS LOOKING FOR A PART TIME JOB TO SUPPORT HIS STUDIES. 6py2B

Hope this letter find radiant health and best of spirits. When we meet last time you have mentioned, that you are looking for a part-time job, and this is the reason for writing today. Yesterday, when I meet one of our friend Sachin who are working in sales of product and his company need one other boy part-time as a delivering products to the consumers. When I told him your name they are eager to waiting you and give me proper details. This job is from 5 to 7 pm and it gives you around 2000/-months which will support you in your studies In addition, It provides you flexible working hours. I suggest you this job owing to you know all the street well and also your father posted there since last 2 years. I hope this apportunity suits your part time job. If you are interested in doing work call him for further details. His number is475892521. Thanking you, Your Faithfully, Sachin.

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meet
 last time you have mentioned, that you are looking for a part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
, and this is the reason for writing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Yesterday, when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 one of our friend Possible spelling mistake found.MachineChinSackingAachenCochinSachs
Sachin
 who are working in sales of product and his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 need one other boy part-time as a delivering products to the consumers. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 him your name they are eager to With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: "wait".wait
waiting
 you and give me proper This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 is from 5 to 7 pm and it gives you around 2000/-months which will support you in your studies In addition
, It provides you flexible working hours. I suggest you this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 owing to you know all the street well and also
 your father posted there since last 2 years.

I hope this Possible spelling mistake found.opportunity
apportunity
 suits your This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. If you are interested
 in doing work call him for further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. His number is475892521.

Thanking you,

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Faithfully
,

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Sachin
. 