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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there Write at least 150 words

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there J2AE
Hi Kampi. It's so great to hear from you after so long. I'm glad to hear that your global rotation was approved and that you'll be posted to our local branch in Lusaka. It will be great to have you closer by. As you know, the capital is the best place to be if you want to be where things are happening, and you'll definitely get to experience that in Lusaka. It's known for the best nightlife and food countrywide. I'm not too familiar with the place but Kabwata might be a good place for you to settle down. It's quite close to downtown and a ride to there takes only about 10-15 mins compared to the hour long rides from other areas of town. And once in town, it's pretty easy to get anywhere else. Sadly, our public transport system sucks and the best way to get around is with your own car. That's the best way to avoid been stuck in traffic as you can take shortcuts through the place. Taxi's are available too but the fare costs an arm and a leg. I'm sure once you settle in, it will be quite easy to make a few friends. Kabwata also has a few happening spots and so it should be fun over the weekends. I look forward to coming by once you come through. Let me know once your flights booked and you're heading in. Can't wait to see you soon. Love, Alexa.
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long. I'm glad to hear that your global rotation
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to our local branch in Lusaka. It will be great to have you closer by.

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to be if you want to be where things are happening, and you'll definitely
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get
to experience that in Lusaka. It's known for the
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best
nightlife and food countrywide. I'm not too familiar with the
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place
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might be a
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for you to settle down. It's quite close to downtown and a ride to
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takes
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about 10-15
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compared to the hour long rides from other areas of town. And
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in town, it's pretty easy to
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get
anywhere else.
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, our public transport system sucks and the
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way to
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around is with your
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car. That's the
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way to avoid
been stuck
in traffic as you can take shortcuts through the
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place
.
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are available too
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the fare costs an arm and a leg.

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once
you settle in, it will be quite easy to
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make
a few friends.
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Kabwata
also
has a few happening spots and
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it should be fun over the weekends. I look forward to coming by
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once
you
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come
through.
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me know
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your flights booked and you're heading in.

Can't wait to
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see
you
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,

Alexa.
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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6.0
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