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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it od0q

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in the hope that you will solve the problem I am facing. About 2 weeks back, I bought a camera from the shop that has your membership. However, when I reached my destination I realized that some of the items which were promised to me at the time of purchasing were not handed to me. I bought Nikon ASR45 camera from the shop in the main market. The Camera is latest model with new technology. I was impressed with picture quality as it offered High Definition image. The shopkeeper told me that the company is offering extra items with it which will be under the same prize. So, I decided to buy the camera. He packed the camera really well as I was traveling abroad so that it will not broke. It happens on the location when I opened the package and realized that the extra items such as prime lens was not there. I informed the agent and he suggested me to contact you. I would appreciate if company provides me with the items as promised. I could not capture my holiday because of the mistake of the shopkeeper. I want you take the necessary steps. Waiting for your reply. Sincerely, Sam.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter in the hope that you will solve the problem I am facing. About 2 weeks back, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 from the shop that has your membership. However
, when I reached my destination I realized that If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 which were promised
 to me at the time of purchasing were not handed to me.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 Nikon ASR45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 from the shop in the main market. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
Camera
 is A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".the latest
latest
 model with new technology. I was impressed
 with picture quality as it offered High Definition image. The shopkeeper This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is offering extra You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 with it which will be under the same prize. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
. He packed the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
really
 well as I was traveling abroad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it will not The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "break"break
broke
.

It happens on the location when I opened the package and realized that the extra You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 such as prime lens was not there. I informed the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).agent, and
agent and
 he suggested me to contact you.

I would appreciate if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 provides me with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 as promised. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 could not capture my holiday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the mistake of the shopkeeper. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want you take the necessary steps.

Waiting for your reply.

Sincerely
, Sam. 