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Write a letter to the manager of a company which is based in a foreign country to recommend your family member for a suitable job.

Write a letter to the manager of a company which is based in a foreign country to recommend your family member for a suitable job. XD88g
Dear Mr. Smith, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to recommend my brother for the manager position in your car manufacturing unit in London. My name is Droan Sachdeva, and I am working as chief engineer in the Delhi manufacturing unit of your company. I have been working for the past ten years now, and I feel very comfortable working around. Recently, I saw a job opening of operations manager in the London branch in our company’s portal and being an employee, I wanted to recommend my brother living in London for the job. My brother holds an advanced degree in Operations management, and he holds six sigma certifications as well. In addition, he has more than 15 years of relevant experience in a UK plant for another company. I am attaching his resume for reference with this letter. I hope you will consider my brother for this position. Yours sincerely, Droan
Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope this letter finds you in
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good
health. I am writing this letter to recommend my
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brother
for the manager position in your car manufacturing unit in London.

My name is
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Droan
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Sachdeva
, and I am working as chief engineer in the Delhi manufacturing unit of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I have been working for the past ten years
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now
, and I feel
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very
comfortable working around.

Recently, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a job opening of operations manager in the London branch in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s portal and being an employee, I wanted to recommend my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brother
living in London for the job.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brother
holds an advanced degree in Operations management, and he holds six sigma certifications
as well
.
In addition
, he has more than 15 years of relevant experience in a UK plant for another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I am attaching his resume for reference with this letter.

I hope you will consider my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brother
for this position.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Droan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of a company which is based in a foreign country to recommend your family member for a suitable job.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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