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letter to staff nurse reagrding transfer

letter to staff nurse reagrding transfer 7WkMn

Dear ms. susan, I am writing this letter to inform you regarding MS. Diana who underwent left hemiarthroplasty and needs further care and management for speedy recovery. She was admitted to the hospital on 28/6/2017 and found fit to undergo left hemiarthroplasty. Post operatively, she had gi distress along with hip and back pain. Besides, she has been restless and confused due to morphine hence commenced acetaminophen for pain. Later, physiotherapy has been started as she complained of dizziness and light-headedness. Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of mild hyperlipidaemia, hypertension, cad, tendonitis of right shoulder. she also underwent ptca in 2009. Socially she lives with her husband who is not able to take care of her. As per the discharge plan it would be greatly appreciated if you could assist her in doing day to day activity. Please ensure that she is adhere to physiotherapy and monitor her medication also. Of note, her dressing must remain dry and intact. Furthermore, staples can be removed on day 14. kindly note that her weight bearing is limited to 30% for the next 6 weeks.

Dear ms. Possible spelling mistake found.SusanSudanPusanSusana
susan
,

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding MS. Diana who underwent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
Possible spelling mistake found.
hemiarthroplasty
 and needs further
 care and management for speedy recovery.

She was admitted
 to the hospital on 28/6/2017 and found fit to undergo This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
Possible spelling mistake found.
hemiarthroplasty
. Post operatively
, she had Possible spelling mistake found.GIIgoGBgigCGI
gi
 distress along with hip and back pain. Besides
, she has been restless and confused due to morphine hence
 commenced acetaminophen for pain. Later, physiotherapy has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 as she complained of dizziness and light-headedness.

Her past medical history reveals that she is a known case of mild Possible spelling mistake found.hyperlipidemia
hyperlipidaemia
, hypertension, cad, Possible spelling mistake found.tendinitis
tendonitis
 of right shoulder. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
also
 underwent Possible spelling mistake found.PTCTCApicaPACAPCAPTA
ptca
 in 2009.

Socially
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 with her husband who is not able to take care of her.

As per the discharge plan it would be greatly
 appreciated if you could assist her in doing day to day activity. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 ensure that she is Consider using a past participle here: "adhered".adhered
adhere
 to physiotherapy and monitor her medication also
. Of note, her dressing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 remain dry and intact. Furthermore
, staples can be removed
 on day 14. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterKindly
kindly
 note that her weight bearing is limited
 to 30% for the next
 6 weeks. 