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Write a letter to me best friend

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This afternoon, after working hard to solve the math problem, I surfed the Internet to reduce stress. When I was listening to music, a message was sent by my friend’s account, telling me that he would drop out of school. Due to the financial issues, his parents were not able to afford his tuition, hence he was forced to leave our school. It was unbelievable! I had thought that it was just a trick by him at first, but then I realized his sadness via the text. He is my best peer at school, who shared many memorable moments with me. His aim is to teach the students, however, the opportunity for him to achieve his dream has been lowered. Now, he is applying for a job to maintain his life, so we could not see each other for a long time. I regretted not knowing his story sooner. I wish I could share the problem with him.
This afternoon, after working
hard
to solve the math problem, I surfed the Internet to
reduce
stress
. When I was listening to music, a message was
sent
by my friend’s account, telling me that he would drop out of school. Due to the financial issues, his parents were not able to afford his tuition,
hence
he
was forced
to
leave
our school. It was unbelievable! I had
thought
that it was
just
a trick by him at
first
,
but
then I realized his sadness via the text. He is my best peer at school, who shared
many
memorable moments with me. His aim is to teach the students,
however
, the opportunity for him to achieve his dream has
been lowered
.
Now
, he is applying for a job to maintain his life,
so
we could not
see
each other for a long time. I regretted not knowing his story sooner. I wish I could share the problem with him.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to me best friend

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  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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