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Apology letter about for not attending to the party

Apology letter about for not attending to the party kbOP2
Dear my friend Tom: I am writing to apologize for not attending to your birthday party celebrated on 24 of June. I hope you and your family are superb well. I received your invitation card the day before yesterday. At first, a number of thanks for inviting me to your birthday celebration. On the contrary I am deeply sorry to that I can not attend it although I had promised that I would attend it. In the light of the fact that on that day my father had an essential meeting and my mother also had to go to my grandmother till late in the evening. Consequently, I had to stay at home alone. In addition, I had numerous work to do on my own. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party. I am surely you must have a nice time with your friends and relatives. Please do not be angry, I hope you will understand my problem. Once again I sincerely apologize for not attending to your party. I will surely meet with you when I have spare time. With lots of love I am closing this letter. Yours faithfully, John Brown.
Dear my friend Tom: I am writing to apologize for not attending to your birthday party celebrated on 24 of June. I hope you and your family are superb well. I received your invitation card the day
before
yesterday. At
first
, a number of thanks for inviting me to your birthday celebration.
On the contrary
I am
deeply
sorry to that I can not attend it although I had promised that I would attend it. In the light of the fact that on that day my father had an essential meeting and my mother
also
had to go to my grandmother till late in the evening.
Consequently
, I had to stay at home alone.
In addition
, I had numerous work to do on my
own
.
Therefore
, I could not go to your birthday party. I am
surely
you
must
have a nice time with your friends and relatives.
Please
do not be angry, I hope you will understand my problem. Once again I
sincerely
apologize for not attending to your party. I will
surely
meet
with you when I have spare time. With lots of
love
I am closing this letter. Yours
faithfully
, John Brown.
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IELTS letter Apology letter about for not attending to the party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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