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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film.

Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. wKYYe
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing this to inform you that i completely forgot to take my jacket last time after the movie in Majestic Cinema. I booked two movie tickets online under name of "Rasith Thirimanna" at 9. 30pm showtime in Colombo 06 cinema. I was so thrilled by series of action in movie as a result i left my jacket at the hall number 10. Jacket is made of brown leather and two black stripes are painted in both side of the arms. Inner part is fully black and pocket is in top left. I was in row number J, 10th seat and middle section of the hall. If you are able to find the Jacket, please keep it at the main counter, hence i collect it while heading home after work. My home is located quite near to the cinema, therefore please let me know the convenient time and day. I would prefer if it's after 7pm. Thank you in advance for your assistant and looking forward to hear from you. yours faithfully, Rasith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this to inform you that
i
completely forgot to take my
jacket
last time after the movie in Majestic Cinema. I booked two movie tickets online under name of
"
Rasith
Thirimanna
"
at 9. 30pm showtime in Colombo 06 cinema.

I was
so
thrilled by series of action in movie
as a result
i
left
my
jacket
at the hall
number 10.
Jacket
is made
of brown leather and two black stripes
are painted
in both side of the arms. Inner part is
fully
black and pocket is in top
left
. I was in row number J, 10th seat and middle section of the hall.

If you are able to find the
Jacket
,
please
keep
it at the main counter,
hence
i
collect it while heading home after work. My home
is located
quite near to the cinema,
therefore
please
let
me know the convenient time and day. I would prefer if it's after 7pm.

Thank you in advance for your assistant and looking forward
to hear
from you.

yours
faithfully
,

Rasith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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