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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the recent reporting about Asian music industry in general and K-pop music in particular in your newspaper. In your paper, you don’t acknowledge that our celebrities are successful by their own talent and effort. While there are some scandalous people among the artists, it doesn’t mean that all of them are the same. The official statistic informs that the Asian music has a positive influence on the Western country such as the USA, England. You have also used offensive language by calling them “gay”, “ladylike”, etc. , especially BTS and boy groups. As a hard fan of BTS and K-pop, I feel uncomfortable and upsetting about your statements and I think that this paper will bring non fans of our music negative views. Our idols have been working hard and practicing hourly for a long time to publish a product, which can satisfy the audiences. I want you to make your mind up about what you have written about them and delete this writing. We obviously have different hobbies and interests, but you don’t have permission to discriminate against the Asian music. However, if you didn’t take any action, I would announce to the main founder of this newspaper company. Sincerely, Dong Tra
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the recent reporting about Asian
music
industry
in general
and K-pop
music
in particular
in your newspaper. In your paper, you don’t acknowledge that our celebrities are successful by their
own
talent and effort. While there are
some
scandalous
people
among the artists, it doesn’t mean that all of them are the same. The official statistic informs that the Asian
music
has a
positive
influence on the Western country such as the USA, England. You have
also
used
offensive language by calling them “gay”, “ladylike”, etc.
,
especially
BTS and boy groups.

As a
hard
fan of BTS and K-pop, I feel uncomfortable and upsetting about your statements and I
think
that this paper will bring non fans of our
music
negative
views. Our idols have been working
hard
and practicing hourly for a long time to publish a product, which can satisfy the audiences.

I want you to
make
your mind up about what you have written about them and delete this writing. We
obviously
have
different
hobbies and interests,
but
you don’t have permission to discriminate against the Asian
music
.
However
, if you didn’t take any action, I would announce to the main founder of this newspaper
company
.

Sincerely
,

Dong
Tra
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IELTS letter complain about a article or a newspaper

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212 words
6.0
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