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Write a letter to the event organizer to let them know you are not happy with the hotel that was booked for your meeting Please say What meeting was it Why didn t you like the hotel Suggest what the organizer should have done differently

Write a letter to the event organizer to let them know you are not happy with the hotel that was booked for your meeting Please say What meeting was it Why didn t you like the hotel Suggest what the organizer should have done differently pRe0a

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you in regards to non complaint behavior along with inimical experience from hotel staffs in The Grand Hotel where we hold a business meeting last week. The meeting was very importantly egregious attended with many veterans and professionals to boom our business in this competitive market. Though the physical outlook was quite okay, internal service and unwelcoming staffs were very condemnable. The worst had had happened when we were about to commence the meeting the ceiling fan fell on the our meeting table. Luckily, none of us were injured. Moreover, when we apprised hotel management about the incident, they looked aloof at the situation and impeded in collecting debris without any apologies. Therefore, as a sincere customer, I personally suggest, you should have understood the value of our business meeting with such well known eminent professionals and accordingly reserved best known hotel with better hospitality. Thus, as our meeting was postponed because of that incident, on behalf of my company, I humbly request you to abide by our agreement and return full amount of money on following bank details. Bank name: The Global Bank Swift code: 551133 Account Number: 21321321321 Account name: The Global Bank I am very sorry for the inconvenience occurred to you. Regards, Business Manager The Agile Solutions John Smith

Dear Sir/Madam

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in regards to
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hotel
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Hotel
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meeting
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last week
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
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very
importantly
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many
 veterans and professionals to boom our business in this competitive market.

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very
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condemnable
. The worst had had happened when we were about to commence the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 the ceiling fan fell on the our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 table. Luckily, none of us were injured
. Moreover
, when we apprised You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 management about the incident, they looked aloof at the situation and impeded in collecting debris without any apologies.

Therefore
, as a sincere customer, I personally
 suggest, you should have understood the value of our business You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 with such well known eminent professionals and accordingly
 reserved best known You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 with better hospitality. Thus
, as our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
was postponed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of that incident, on behalf of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, I humbly
 request you to abide by our agreement and return full amount of money on following bank This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

Bank name: The Global Bank

Swift code: 551133

Account Number: 21321321321

Account name: The Global Bank

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sorry for the inconvenience occurred to you.

Regards,

Business Manager

The Agile Solutions

John Smith