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Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper, tell him about the problem that your community is face in local market, 1) What you like about shopping the local market Problems that shoppers are facing. Suggest the solution.

Dear Sir/ Madam, First of all, I wanted express my gratitude to your daily newspaper for being vocal on the local issues. I am writing this letter to highlight some long pending issues that community is facing in the local market. The Town Market is very vital for the local residents. I service the most the household locally with wide variety of product with reasonable prices. Most the nearby community members come here for their daily needs. The local coffee shops and restaurants in the market attract lot more customers every day. Due to the facts, its favorite palace for people for their shopping and entertainment. From sometime we try to drawing attention of the authorities to the problem of parking in and around the market. Due to insufficient parking motorist are force to park along walkways. Numerous number cars in evening cause the problem for shoppers to walk around the market. Moving on, most of the vendors are using plastic bags to put the shopping items for customer. Since everyone is using the plastic bag the lot more plastic pollution in market. These un decomposable plastic is causing an environment hazard. At the end I like to suggest to authorities to solve the parking issue they should start building a parking space near the market to provide the relief to the shoppers. Secondly, the local government should take an action against for the use of plastic bags by making some SOPs for the market vendors. The business owners should make responsible to curb the use of it. I hope my letter will find the place in your newspaper weekly article on local issues. And if fortunate enough, get to heads by the authorities. Thanks in Advance. Your faithfully, MOHD
Dear Sir/ Madam,

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
, I
The verb “express” needs to be in the to-infinitive form.
wanted express
my gratitude to your daily newspaper for being vocal on the
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local
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issues
. I am writing this letter to highlight
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some
long pending
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issues
that community is facing in the
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local
market.

The Town
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Market
is
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very
vital for the
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local
residents. I service the most the household
locally
with wide variety of product with reasonable prices. Most the nearby community members
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come
here for their daily needs. The
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local
coffee shops and restaurants in the
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market
attract lot more customers every day. Due to the facts, its favorite palace for
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people
for their shopping and entertainment.

From sometime we try to
The verb after “to” should be in the base form: “draw”.
drawing
attention of the authorities to the problem of
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parking
in and around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
. Due to insufficient
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parking
motorist are force to park along walkways. Numerous number cars in evening cause the problem for shoppers to walk around the
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market
. Moving on, most of the vendors are using
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plastic
bags to put the shopping items for customer.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
everyone is using the
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plastic
bag the lot more
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plastic
pollution in
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market
. These
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un
decomposable
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plastic
is causing an environment hazard.

At the
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end
I like to suggest to authorities to solve the
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parking
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issue
they should
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start
building a
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parking
space near the
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market
to provide the relief to the shoppers.
Secondly
, the
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local
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government
should take an action against for the
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use
of
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plastic
bags by making
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some
SOPs for the
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market
vendors. The business owners should
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make
responsible to curb the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of it.

I hope my letter will find the place in your newspaper weekly article on
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local
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issues
. And if fortunate
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enough
,
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get
to heads by the authorities.

Thanks in Advance.

Did you mean “Yours”? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper, tell him about the problem that your community is face in local market, 1) What you like about shopping the local market Problems that shoppers are facing. Suggest the solution.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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