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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it.

Dear Sir/Madam, This well-considered letter draws your attention towards main accessories of the camera missing from the box. I bought Sony DSLR SRS-XB 20 model camera which is 40 MP front lens with aperture, 10x zoom, panoramic view and camera stand for auto capture facilities available. I bought this camera for 45 thousand INR while on my trip to London and bought it from authorized Sony center located on the 4th street of the Avenue Road. I have attached the receipt along with this letter. As i was on my way back to home from London and did not check the camera box completely, however I was assured by the sales staff that all the necessary accessories is in the box, but to my surprise when I opened the box I could not find the aperture lens and leather cover which is mentioned in the product box, I have filmed the unboxing and attached the clip for your reference. Since it is a packing mistake, I request you to kindly send me the missing accessories without which the camera is obsolete and of no use for me. In case if you are not able to ship the product I would request you to kindly refund back the full amount in my account and I would courier the camera box. I look forward to your reply. Regards, Chandan

Dear Sir/Madam,

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camera
 missing from the box.

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bought
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 have attached the receipt along with this letter.

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box
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but
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, I have filmed the unboxing and attached the clip for your reference.

Since it is a packing mistake, I request you to kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the missing accessories without which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 is obsolete and of no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for me. In case if you are not able to ship the product I would request you to kindly refund back the full amount in my account and I would courier the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 box.

I look forward to your reply.

Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.Chandon
Chandan