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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, This well-considered letter draws your attention towards leave intimation for one week I need during the course. I have enrolled into 2 year Advanced Digital Marketing course which started in January this year. This is a 4 semester course spanning 6 months each semester. I have already completed my first semester and 2nd semester started last month, since I am in the middle of the semester and some important concepts are going on, I felt the need to intimate you in advance. I need one week leave as my father is critically ill and needs to be looked after. Since my father got operated of severe lung infection and as been advised a week's bed rest. My mother would not be able to look after him after completing her household work, so my presence is extremely important. As post operation tests also needs to be conducted i believe my mother would not be able to handle on her own. Considering the urgency kindly grant me a week's leave. As I mentioned since important concepts of the course is under way and I do not want to miss them, Please allow me to attend those classes in my extra time in the parallel classes running. Also for some doubts regarding the topics it would be good if you can arrange couple of doubt's clarification session with Professor Bill. Please consider the urgency and allow me one week leave and allow me to take those extra sessions. I look forward to your reply. Regards, Chandan

Dear Sir/Madam,

This well-considered letter draws your attention towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withauthorizationallowance
leave
 intimation for one week I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 during the course.

I have enrolled into 2 year Advanced Digital Marketing course which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 in January this year. This is a 4 semester course spanning 6 months each semester. I have already completed my first
 semester and 2nd semester This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 last month, since I am in the middle of the semester and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 concepts are going on, I felt the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to intimate you in advance.

I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 one week You use this word too often, consider replacing it withauthorizationallowance
leave
 as my father is critically
 ill and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to be looked
 after. Since my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 operated of severe lung infection and as been advised
 a week's bed rest. My mother would not be able to look after him after completing her household work, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my presence is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 post operation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluates
tests
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to be conducted
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 believe my mother would not be able to handle on her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
.

Considering the urgency kindly grant me a week's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withauthorizationallowance
leave
. As I mentioned since This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 concepts of the course is under way and I do not want to miss them, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to attend those classes in my extra time in the parallel classes running. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 doubts regarding the topics it would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 if you can arrange It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 doubt's clarification session with Professor Bill.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 consider the urgency and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me one week You use this word too often, consider replacing it withauthorizationallowance
leave
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to take those extra sessions. I look forward to your reply.

Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.Chandon
Chandan