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You bought a new HD television last week. At first, it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you have decided to write to them. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter, • give them the background information • describe the problem • ask them to resolve the issue

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about the TV purchased from your store three days ago. I was very excited when I bought it on strong recommendation from one of the sales person at your store but very disappointed to find that only after few hours, the product malfunctioned. I purchased Samsung QLED TV which has the code Q60T. I was assured that this was the latest model and best there to buy. Initially it seemed to be working fine and I was very pleased with my purchase. However, after the TV had been on for few hours, a black line appears across the screen. Though it disappears after a while, it emerges again if the TV is on for a couple of hours. Moreover, the sound quality is strange. People's voice has become robotic and I am sure it is not related to audio-settings. The TV is now unusable and I’m sure this is a manufacturing flaw. I am exceedingly displeased with the quality of the product I purchased from your company. I would request you to send someone to my place as I cannot bring it to your store to claim my warranty because my car is in the repairing shop. I hope this problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to receive a replacement TV. Otherwise, I would like a full refund. Yours Faithfully Alvi

Dear Sir/Madam

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purchased
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very
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bought
 it on strong recommendation from one of the sales person at your store This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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very
 disappointed to find that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after few hours, the product malfunctioned.

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I
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purchased
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QLED
 TV which has the code Q60T. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
was assured
 that this was the latest model and best there to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
. Initially
 it seemed to be working Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fine, and
fine and
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. However
, after the TV had been on for few hours, a black line appears across the screen. Though it disappears after a while, it emerges again if the TV is on for a couple of hours. Moreover
, the sound quality is strange. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
's voice has become Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).robotic, and
robotic and
 I am sure it is not related to audio-settings. The TV is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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unusable and
 I’m sure this is a manufacturing flaw.

I am exceedingly
 displeased with the quality of the product I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 someone to my place as I cannot bring it to your store to claim my warranty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my car is in the repairing shop. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 hope this problem will be resolved
promptly
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive a replacement TV. Otherwise
, I would like a full refund.

Yours Faithfully


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