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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket authority about that. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter • say who are you • give details about the accident • suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about the small tragedy that happened to me when I visited your market last week. I am the regular customer of your supermarket, I have also a membership card and the number is 245879. Let me come to specific event. I went to your store to buy some vegetables and fruits as well as some baking items, When I was searching the baking product in the corner of the baking area section, suddenly one of the men had collided with me from the backside, It was not his fault due to the light intensity in the corner area is very low, In addition to that the floor was also slippery because of the detergent that used by your cleaners. Though it was a minor accident but it could be happen to your other customers in nearby future. I urge you to give instructions to electrical manager to fix the lights in the entire supermarket on urgent basis and do not use clean the floor during the shopping hours. Yours Faithfully Farhan Maqsood

Dear Sir/Madam,

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small
 tragedy that happened to me when I visited your market last week. I am the regular customer of your supermarket, I have also
 a membership card and the number is 245879.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
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event
. I went to your store to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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some
 vegetables and fruits as well
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 baking items, When I was searching the baking product in the corner of the baking area section, suddenly
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 to that the floor was also
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because
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used
 by your cleaners.

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but
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happen
 to your other customers in nearby future. I urge you to give instructions to electrical manager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the lights in the entire supermarket on urgent basis and do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 clean the floor during the shopping hours.

Yours Faithfully


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