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Food in airport looks good and make us happy

Food in airport looks good and make us happy 3MEDN

I am Rishabh Agarwal; I took a flight no A5467 of Jet Airways on 20th August 2021 from Mumbai to Bengaluru. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of unavailability of vegetarian food during the travel. I had booked a flight no A5647 of Jet Airways from Mumbai to Bengaluru as I had an official meeting in Bengaluru. There was no much time available between my landing in Bengaluru and reaching the meeting place, Hence I decided to have my food in the flight itself. At the time of booking I have placed a special request for vegetarian food and it was accepted. When I was in the flight and the air hostess started to serve the food. But when they came to me to serve they mentioned the vegetarian food is all over. When I enquired I was being told that due to mismanagement of the food from the backend this problem occurred. I was completely disappointed and decided to lodge a complaint post my meeting got over. I would like to conclude and urge the Management to ensure whenever any meals are booked online along with the ticket, arrangements are to be made accordingly so that there are no discomforts occurred to the passengers. Thanks for your consideration. Yours Faithfully Rishabh Agarwal

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flight
 no A5467 of Jet Airways on 20th August 2021 from Mumbai to Bengaluru. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of unavailability of vegetarian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 during the travel.

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I
 had booked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshuttlearrivaltriptransportdeparture
flight
 no A5647 of Jet Airways from Mumbai to Bengaluru as I had an official meeting in Bengaluru. There was Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 much time available between my landing in Bengaluru and reaching the meeting place, Hence
 I decided to have my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshuttlearrivaltriptransportdeparture
flight
 itself. At the time of booking I have placed a special request for vegetarian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 and it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
. When I was in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshuttlearrivaltriptransportdeparture
flight
 and the air hostess This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to serve the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when they came to me to serve they mentioned the vegetarian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 is all over. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I Possible spelling mistake. 'enquired' is British English.inquired
enquired
 I was being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that due to mismanagement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 from the backend this problem occurred. I was completely disappointed and decided to lodge a complaint post my meeting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 over.

I would like to conclude
 and urge the Management to ensure whenever any meals are booked
 online along with the ticket, arrangements are to be made
accordingly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that there are no discomforts occurred to the passengers.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully


Rishabh Agarwal