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Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable, making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started around three months ago when my housemate moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up alomost all night and plays incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my housmemate to another room? I would prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quite, I don't mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Joana
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know that I am unhappy with my
current
living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable, making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation
favourably
.

Let
me
explain
my situation. The trouble
started
around three months ago when my housemate
moved
in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my
old
housemate was
extremely
considerate. My
current
housemate,
however
, stays up
alomost
all night and plays
incessantly
loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep
properly
and
therefore
cannot concentrate on my studies.

Would you kindly transfer me or my
housmemate
to another room? I would prefer to
live
with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quite, I don't mind whom I
live
with.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Joana
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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