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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false information. I read the complete article thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However, the information related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degrees C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28 degrees C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false information can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover, fake information can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown. I am humbly requesting you to correct the information and republish it in your future prints. In addition to this, it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given information was false. I am looking forward to a quick resolution of this important matter. Yours faithfully Name

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours faithfully


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