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Your friend, Hannah, wants to know about your last holiday. She wants to know where you went and what you did. Write an email to your friend.

Your friend, Hannah, wants to know about your last holiday. She wants to know where you went and what you did. Write an email to your friend. OEGD3
Hi Hannah, How’s it going? Thanks for your email. Now, I’ll tell you something about my holiday to HCM city. It’s was so fantastic. And I had a great time thereOn my first day, I went to Botanical Gardens so that I could see many different animals, and flowers. I spent all the morning playing with them and taking photos. At 3p. m, I visited Landmark 81. There, I enjoyed the beautiful view and ate foreign foods in the restaurant. Although the food was expensive, it was very tasty. In the next day, I went to Suoi Tien to relax and have fun by playing games and watching 4D films. On the last day, I went shopping to buy some souvenirs and presents for my family. And their prices were OK for me. Then, I returned home. My holiday was short, but I was delighted that I did lots of activities which I couldn’t do in my normal holiday. Can you tell me something about your holiday? What did you do on the holiday? Write soon. An.
Hi Hannah, How’s it going? Thanks for your email.
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souvenirs and presents for my family. And their prices were OK for me. Then, I returned home. My
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IELTS letter Your friend, Hannah, wants to know about your last holiday. She wants to know where you went and what you did. Write an email to your friend.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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