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apply for a vacant position in a medical center

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To manager I am delighted sincerely which I would have an opportunity to write this passage. I would like to offer my own reasons and excessive zeal for landing a job in your health care establishment. Since I have majored in a top public university in the field Radiology and having a germane bachelor's degree, due to the fact I think that my academic certificate is precisely pertinent to the vacant position in your clinic. I have been working for a public hospital in my hometown as an adroit radiologic technologist in medical imaging ward. I have been working there for roughly about thirteen years, albeit suppose that I would be skillful, highly experienced and competent abundance for the mentioned position above. As I adore my career ardently, It always evokes me to keep my energy in its pinnacle in order to offer services well to the patient in my work environment. I always try to wear a broad radiant grin on my visage while confronting patients in the workplace, due to the fact I think I could help to palliate their agonies, even a bit. Having a well fame for its medical services across the country, I have been fantasizing to join to your establishment someday. I would be grateful if you could recognize me as a capable job force for your clinic. Your kindness and grace know no end. You're faithfully.
To manager

I
am delighted
sincerely
which I would have an opportunity to write this passage. I would like to offer my
own
reasons and excessive zeal for landing a job in your health care establishment.

Since I have majored in a top public university in the field Radiology and having a germane bachelor's degree, due to the fact I
think
that my academic certificate is
precisely
pertinent to the vacant position in your clinic. I have been working for a public hospital in my hometown as an adroit radiologic technologist in medical imaging ward. I have been working there for roughly about thirteen years, albeit suppose that I would be skillful,
highly
experienced and competent abundance for the mentioned position above.

As I adore my career
ardently
, It always evokes me to
keep
my energy in its pinnacle in order to offer services well to the patient in my work environment. I always try to wear a broad radiant grin on my visage while confronting patients in the workplace, due to the fact I
think
I could
help
to palliate their agonies, even a bit. Having a well fame for its medical services across the country, I have been fantasizing to
join
to your establishment someday.

I would be grateful if you could recognize me as a capable job force for your clinic. Your kindness and grace know no
end
.

You're
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter apply for a vacant position in a medical center

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
233 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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