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Write a letter to your college administration department complaining about the college facility. In your letter, include: what the problem is how this problem has affected you what the college should do to fix this problem

Write a letter to your college administration department complaining about the college facility. In your letter, include: what the problem is how this problem has affected you what the college should do to fix this problem KYEaN
Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to bring in to your attention, current challenge that is being faced by college students. The problem is with regard to canteen services provided by the college. We have already raised this concern with the sanitation department of the college, however we have not got an appropriate response. The food that is being provided by the canteen staff is not edible, also the menu eludes vegetarian options. Many of my friends have been affected because of non-availability of vegan food. We have tried speaking to the canteen team along with college student head, but we were unable to arrive at a consensus. The owner has been rude to various people inside the college premises. The food area has not been sanitized or kept clean, due to which many students have taken ill and been hospitalized. A panic situation has been created and is affecting the overall morale of coming back to college after lockdown. We request the office to take necessary steps to arrive at a solution for the above. A few suggestions, requesting the existing caterer to add in veg menu, regular cleaning of the canteen area. Following covid rules to avoid any chaos within college premises. Hope that these given suggestions would be taken in to consideration. Yours Faithfully, Veena Mannahra
Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to bring in to your attention,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
challenge
that is
being faced
by college students. The problem is with regard to canteen services provided by the college. We have already raised this concern with the sanitation department of the college,
however
we have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an appropriate response.

The food
that is
being provided
by the canteen staff is not edible,
also
the menu eludes vegetarian options.
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Many
of my friends have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of non-availability of vegan food. We have tried speaking to the canteen team along with college student head,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we were unable to arrive at a consensus. The owner has been rude to various
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
inside the college premises. The food area has not
been sanitized
or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
clean, due to which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
students have taken ill and
been hospitalized
. A panic situation has
been created
and is affecting the
overall
morale of coming back to college after lockdown.

We request the office to take necessary steps to arrive at a solution for the above. A few suggestions, requesting the existing caterer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
in veg menu, regular cleaning of the canteen area. Following
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to avoid any chaos within college premises.

Hope that these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
suggestions would
be taken
in to consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Veena
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Mannahra
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your college administration department complaining about the college facility. In your letter, include: what the problem is how this problem has affected you what the college should do to fix this problem

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  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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