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write a letter to Sam using all your notes

write a letter to Sam using all your notes KYNy1

Hi Sam, I am very surprised about your email sent to me. I will go to the competition with you. I love sports. I can go with you in July but I can't go with you in August because I learn more English. I am the big football fan, so I'd love to watch a football match. It would be an exciting football match. Why don't we buy football T-shirts as souvenirs? We can wear them to wacth football match. See you soon, Your best friend

Hi Sam,

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 surprised about your email This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to me. I will go to the competition with you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 sports.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 you in July This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 you in August This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I learn more English.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 fan, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 match. It would be an exciting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 match.

Why don't we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 T-shirts as souvenirs? We can wear them to Possible spelling mistake found.watchACTH
wacth
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 match.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

Your best friend