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The street where you live is very polluted write the council and ask to act about this situation what is main problem. How does if affect you street give some suggestions and requestaction

The street where you live is very polluted write the council and ask to act about this situation what is main problem. How does if affect you street give some suggestions and requestaction jQJ11

Dear sir, I as writing you to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service provide by your sites because where I have been living this area since my childhood on the contrary now this area is more polluting day by day as compared to pervious time I would discuss my whole problem and successful realted to this problem in upcoming paragraphs. Let me introduce why it happened firstly most of people use private vehical instead of private transport that's why air pollution has been increasing day by day apart from that, there has so many factories situated in mu area where I live this industries produce waste toxic metrical which is not only harmful for the human on the contrary also bad for animals and birds life. However, some individuals suffer from dangerous diseases because of harmful pollution infact some animals and birds has been disappearing also. If I gave suggestions you should aware to people about the pollution due to which they will use less private vehical for daily basis as well as company should be banned which does not good for life of whole world please solve this problem especially in my city. I look forward to hearing from your answer. Your sincerely,

Dear sir,

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