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History is an incredibly essential part of culture of any country. Every town has its own history about how it was founded, who lived here before. Why it was called like that etc. What's more, there are a lot of landmarks, cultural places where we can know more about history of our town. It means, that place where we live was found long time ago before ours birth. Let's look at this point on closer inspectation. In my opinion, one of the reason why people like to know more about the place they live in is an interest. For example my town is full of history. Moreover, it's a center of culture in my country. So many world famous writers or just intelligent and creative people live here, left their legacy what became things we can be proud of. Could this mean that someone important possibly lived in my house or on my street? If you're really interested in it, you can go to special place which called archives. I'm sure that you can find there any type of information you like to know, even something about the place you live in.
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If you're
really
interested in it, you can go to special
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place
which called archives. I'm sure that you can find there any type of information you like to know, even something about the
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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