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Write a letter to put a check on the garbage conditions in the city

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I am writing this letter to offer my help for the environmental project initiated by you. I am living in central America from past 8 years. Earlier this area is considered to be the most clean location of the state. However, nowadays due to increase in population the garbage issue in the city is catching fire. The streets and gardens look untidy due to garbage all around. Consequently, this is giving rise to various health problems. I think we should, together organize a awareness campaign to educate people to throw the garbage in dustbin rather than leaving them on the roads and parks. By taking some measures we can put a cap on this growing issue. The government should come up with a stringent policy of imposing hefty fines on the people throwing garbage on the streets and in the green belt areas. Additionally, more dustbins should be installed in the city to avoid throwing of garbage on roads. I hope you will consider my request and give me the opportunity to become part of this project.
I am writing this letter to offer my
help
for the environmental project initiated by you. I am living in
central America
from past 8 years. Earlier this area
is considered
to be
the most clean
location of the state.
However
, nowadays due to increase in population the garbage issue in the city is catching fire. The streets and gardens look untidy due to garbage all around.
Consequently
, this is giving rise to various health problems.

I
think
we should, together organize
a
awareness campaign to educate
people
to throw the garbage in dustbin
rather
than leaving them on the roads and parks.

By taking
some
measures we can put a cap on this growing issue. The
government
should
come
up with a stringent policy of imposing hefty fines on the
people
throwing garbage on the streets and in the green belt areas.
Additionally
, more dustbins should
be installed
in the city to avoid throwing of garbage on roads.

I hope you will consider my request and give me the opportunity to become part of this project.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to put a check on the garbage conditions in the city

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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