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Write a letter to friend you can offer a concert tickets.

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Dear Jassi, I hope you are doing well. It has been only two weeks since. Lastly, I saw you in the college library. I writing this letter to offer a concert ticket which I purchased last week. I would like to tell about I am giving you two ticket of live music performance which held in sector 17 Chandigarh in the evening by Diljit Dosanjh. He is my favorite singer. Unfortunately, due to a personal problem, I cannot go. My uncle who lives in Ludhiana has knee injuries and the doctor operates on his knee on the same day. So I have taken all the responsibility. Furthermore, it would be four hours. I cannot disappoint my father and uncle who trust me. Lastly, I will give this ticket to sarav and you can collect this from him on the day of the concert. I hope you enjoy it a lot and do not forget to make a video and take a picture of every moment and send it on Whatsapp. Thank you Take care and have fun. Warm wishes, Navdeep.
Dear
Jassi
,

I hope you are doing well. It has been
only
two weeks since.
Lastly
, I
saw
you in the college library.
I writing
this letter to offer a concert ticket which I
purchased
last week.

I would like to
tell
about I am giving you two
ticket
of
live
music performance which held in sector 17 Chandigarh in the evening by
Diljit
Dosanjh
. He is my favorite singer. Unfortunately, due to a personal problem, I cannot go. My uncle who
lives
in Ludhiana has knee injuries and the doctor operates on his knee on the same day.
So
I have taken all the responsibility.
Furthermore
, it would be four hours. I cannot disappoint my father and uncle who trust me.
Lastly
, I will give this ticket to
sarav
and you can collect this from him on the day of the concert. I hope you enjoy it a lot and do not forget to
make
a video and take a picture of every moment and
send
it on
Whatsapp
. Thank
you


Take care and have fun.

Warm wishes,

Navdeep
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to friend you can offer a concert tickets.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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