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Complain about damaged essay

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Dear Sir I am writing to complain about TV set which I recently bought from your shop. On November 23, I ordered a TV set and recieved it on November 29. When it had been being used for the first time, it worked properly. Also, when I used it for the second time, it seemed to have some particular problems. You promised me that it had own remote control. After opening its box, we could not find it. However, my grandad is old. He is a man of 70. As you see, he needs remote control. Furthermore, when I tried to switch it on again the same thing happened. In addition to this, the power button did not work properly as I had expected. I look forward to recieving your satisfactory proposal for settlement of my claim within seven days of the date of this letter. Yours sincerely. Bashorat Kadirova
Dear Sir

I am writing to complain about TV set which I recently
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bought
from your shop.

On November 23, I ordered a TV set and
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recieved
it on November 29. When it had been being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the
first
time, it worked
properly
.
Also
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it for the second time, it seemed to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
particular problems. You promised me that it had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
remote control. After opening its box, we could not find it.
However
, my grandad is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
. He is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
of 70. As you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
, he needs remote control.

Furthermore
, when I tried to switch it on again the same thing happened.
In addition
to this, the power button did not work
properly
as I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
.

I look forward to
Possible spelling mistake found.
recieving
your satisfactory proposal for settlement of my claim within seven days of the date of this letter.

Yours
sincerely
.
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Bashorat
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Kadirova
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IELTS letter Complain about damaged essay

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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